Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Week 4 Storytelling: The Realm Divided

King Dasharatha sat on the throne with a heavy heart. A woman who only a few hours ago he loved and trusted had stabbed him in the back. His wife Kaikeyi had used the two promises King Dasharatha owed her to name Bharata the successor to the crown, and to banish Rama to the forests for the rest of his life. Rama would have to live the life of a sage, and would have to have to end his marriage with Sita. The King was a man of great honor and could not violate his word. As Rama entered the throne room, his father began to weep. "What is the matter father, what has made you so upset?", Rama asked. The King gathered himself and asked everyone else to leave the room. When they were alone, the King looked Rama in the eyes and told him the situation. Rama accepted his fate only out of respect for his father. He did not want to go against the promise his father had made, even though he and his father were wronged.

Rama walked backed to his chambers and thought of what he would tell Sita. Leaving her was the only part of his fate that truly upset him, and he could not bear the thought of being without her. As he approached her chambers, he decided he could not bear to look upon her beauty again then have to leave her forever. Rama went to his brother Lakshmana, told him the news, and asked him to inform Sita of his departure and the circumstances surrounding it. Rama then gathered what possessions he would take, and left the city in a disguise so nobody would see him leave.



King Dasharatha on his deathbed, Wikipedia



King Dasharatha died of grief the night Rama left the city. The whole city mourned his passing and discussed the rumors of what caused it. Over the next few days the true story of why the King died became know amongst the city. The people rioted in the streets, and demanded that Kaikeyi be executed. Lakshmana came before the people of the city and asked that they respect the honor of the King, and in turn honor the promise he made to Kaikeyi. The people of the city respected Lakshmana, and did as he asked of them.

Bharatha arrived in the city and was crowned as King. As Bharatha was crowned King, an agent of Ravana entered the room disguised as one of the King's guards. Ravana had learned of the situation and decided to seize the opportunity. He sent an agent to assassinate the King, who would then surrender himself to the King's guard. When interrogated, the agent would lie and claim to be working for Kaikeyi. He hoped this would cause a rebellion among the people of the city, and his foes would be weakened by this divide.

The agent of Ravana moved closer to the King as the ceremony drew to a close. Just as the King tried to retire from the crowd, the assassin stuck the King's heart with a dagger. In the aftermath of the killing, the assassin was captured and interrogated. Ravana's plan had worked, and the investigators believed Kaikeyi had planned the killing so she could be Queen. The night before he was to be executed, the agent of Ravana escaped the dungeon. As he was leaving, he spotted Sita. Her beauty was unrivaled, and he decided to kidnap her and offer her to Ravana.


Author's note: This story was inspired by Buck's Ramayana: King Rama's Way. I wanted to tell an alternate version of Rama's banishment and how his quest against Ravana began.

Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way.

3 comments:

  1. Hey, Barclay! Great story- I really like how you added dialogue, thoughts, and details in order to make the story more meaningful and powerful than how it was written in the book. To be honest, I wish the book was written more like the way you write. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your pieces in the future.

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  2. Great story, Barclay. I like how you started the story off with a description of Dasharatha having a heavy heart on the throne. I think that it really sets the mood for the rest of the story. I agree with Taylor, your writing is very clear and interesting, while the book can be kind of complicated at times. Keep up the good work!

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  3. Barclay, wonderful story this week! Yours is by far my favorite! I really enjoyed how you introduced this story with Dasarathas sorrow and focused more on the happenings of his city rather than what the book shows us. I think that you're really improving on your ability to tell descriptive stories! Keep up the great work!!!

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